The poem was supposed to be a dramatization. But, I found out that I am not very good at dramatizations at all. Happily though, I was allowed to write infree verse! Which, to me, is preferable over trying to rhyme and fit everything into a meter.
I spent most of the week wondering what in the world I was going to write about, and finally last night I penned this:
My mind
and this piece of paper
are kindred spirits
undeniably.
We lay and think
blank thoughts. Both with
wrinkled brows.
Eyes wide open;
neither blinking nor seeing.
So I sit. I stare and
the paper stares right back.
Who will win this contest? I wonder
if he or I will cave in first.
Who will crack, showing signs
of life and lose
this
uninspired
staring
game.
Not a dramatization, but thankfully my "teacher" is laid-back. {Goodness, I love homeschooling!}
My littler brother's only comment after reading it was: "Why doesn't it rhyme?!?"
Obviously he did not appreciate my attempt at imitating such poets as Carl Sandburg and William Carlos Williams. Ah, well. :P
I really like it!! Great job; it's so true. :) My sister prefers rhyming poems, too, but I like to write some of both.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Marian!! I write both too, but I think my rhymes always sound stupid, hehe. {Hence why I love free verse!} :)
ReplyDeleteRight on the rhymes, Melee! I often resort to reading for those who wonder how free verses are poems. Hehe.
ReplyDeleteLove the way your words are broken into lines(",)
Hehe, thanks!! :)
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