tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post825572261480580758..comments2023-07-12T08:50:38.984-04:00Comments on The Midnight Train of Thought: White PetalsMeleehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00848998866008289402noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-62968665050388479382011-03-30T22:28:03.527-04:002011-03-30T22:28:03.527-04:00holly and the wolves: My most heartfelt thanks for...<i>holly and the wolves:</i> My most heartfelt thanks for your sweetest of comments. Thank <i>you</i>, my dear. :)<br /><br /><i>CloudyKim:</i> Don't be sorry! Life tends to take up so much time, doesn't it? <br />Thank you very much!<br /><br />Oh, that sounds right about where I am right now - it's still sticking. I don't know if this is just because of your vagueness... but what you said really resonates with what I'm experiencing. Hm. Good luck to you too! :)Meleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848998866008289402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-67193808911882910942011-03-30T11:16:34.642-04:002011-03-30T11:16:34.642-04:00Ahhh! I'm so behind on the blogs! I'm sorr...Ahhh! I'm so behind on the blogs! I'm sorry for it :O I love the poem and I think the focus on the petals are a lovely image. <br /><br />I actually tried to say goodbye to something a few weeks back but it sticks like super glue to me still; it's not a bad thing - everyone needs a muse - but sometimes daydreaming gets a little tiring, haha. How's that for vague? :) But I know what you mean. Good luck!CloudyKimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17601048610753963689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-728051964476750642011-03-30T08:29:30.099-04:002011-03-30T08:29:30.099-04:00"a gossamer sadness" - what a beautiful ..."a gossamer sadness" - what a beautiful phrase. & the whole format, the whole style of this poem echoes so perfectly the theme. you are so very talented, my dear - it's a wonderful skill so make something beautiful out of something sad. thank you for sharing xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-35584664371231146242011-03-29T19:42:15.096-04:002011-03-29T19:42:15.096-04:00Thank you so much, lovely Jhordyn. I've always...Thank you so much, lovely Jhordyn. I've always been one to find beauty in tragedy as well. Ever since I was a little girl I've loved a good, sad story. :)Meleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848998866008289402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-19779993581511275482011-03-29T19:06:41.960-04:002011-03-29T19:06:41.960-04:00I often write with sad undertones as well dearest,...I often write with sad undertones as well dearest, I feel that any piece worth writing must have more than one layer, sad adds a nice depth to a piece I feel. But I was always one to find beauty in tragedy. Lovely piece you have created here!<br /><br />xx and hugs<br /><br />JhordynJhordyn Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15540278614559729167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-55629546511630589382011-03-27T22:48:01.656-04:002011-03-27T22:48:01.656-04:00Thank you ever so much, dearest Jenica. I am vacil...Thank you ever so much, dearest Jenica. I am vacillating between feeling strong and feeling weak. I think I will be fine soon. Hopefully. :)<br /><3Meleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848998866008289402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-2167930664808418912011-03-27T01:14:18.063-04:002011-03-27T01:14:18.063-04:00Beautiful poem! Your interpretation of the petals ...Beautiful poem! Your interpretation of the petals is unusual and lovely, though melancholy...Whatever (small) thing happened to you, I hope you're feeling better about it all now. xoxoJenicanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-44198577038329815042011-03-26T17:26:17.446-04:002011-03-26T17:26:17.446-04:00Joanna: Oh, goodness. Thank you so much. I always ...<i>Joanna:</i> Oh, goodness. Thank you so much. I always feel strange when I write things and call them poems because I'm never sure whether they are or not. Your encouragement is SO appreciated. Thank you, I think I am going to be okay. <3<br /><br /><i>Minna:</i> Oh my dear, thank you very much for your lovely comment. I am glad you liked my song so much. :)<br />Funnily, I don't feel that I have much poetry-writing ability at all. But that really means so much to me, especially coming from such an extremely talented writer as yourself! <3<br />You are quite welcome. :) I really do need to watch more! As of yet, I've never even seen a full episode. I'll have to make time to sit down and watch it. I do love those two!Meleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848998866008289402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-59600026854575408672011-03-26T14:43:48.295-04:002011-03-26T14:43:48.295-04:00Melee,
I've not been commenting here half as ...Melee, <br />I've not been commenting here half as much as I'd like too. I wanted to say that I fell entirely in love with the song you posted a while ago. You have such a sweet voice.<br />As for the above...well, I can only tell you that it is something very beautiful. I greatly envy your ability to write poetry.<br />xxx<br />ps. Thank you for all your kind words on my blog, they all ways make me smile. Also, you should watch A Bit of Fry & Laurie. It is hilarity itself.minnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17757761762961194243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-27151671853809859542011-03-26T06:44:54.744-04:002011-03-26T06:44:54.744-04:00This was beautiful! It honestly brought a tear to ...This was beautiful! It honestly brought a tear to my eye. Oh, I love that you're writing poems. Many people are so afraid of experimenting with that genre. I think it really suits you. And about your source of inspiration, I hope you're okay... xxxxJoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03641171588852765419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-74935824074139645172011-03-25T21:12:47.852-04:002011-03-25T21:12:47.852-04:00Everly Pleasant: Thank you very much for your swee...<i>Everly Pleasant:</i> Thank you very much for your sweet comment! I am happy you can relate. Though perhaps that is not a good thing. I hope these sadnesses continue to be kept to a bare minimum, if not total nonexistence. <br />P.S. I was so delighted to see your smiling face on my blog. :)<br /><br /><i>P.s. I am Me:</i> Thank you for your kind words and concern. Something about being sad and thoughtful is so conducive to writing! <br /><br /><i>haze</i>: Oh, yes - of course! I consider you a friend too. :) Thank you so much. I am fine for the most part, truly. <3<br />You should take one if you feel so inclined! I would miss you, of course. But then I could be extra-happy when you come back! :)<br />Hahaha, yeah, I toyed with the idea for a long time before I actually carried it out. <br /><br /><i>Jade:</i> Thank you so, <i>so</i> much. That's basically the feeling I was going for(for the sadness). You are so perceptive. <3<br /><br /><i>Ever:</i> Thank you very much. It does hurt, indeed. I am hoping for eventual lightness too. So far, no such luck...<br /><br /><i>E:</i> Oh! Dearest, thank you from the bottom of my heart. <3<br /><br /><i>Kaleidescope Girl:</i> There is indeed! I never think to myself "Oh, I love flowers!" But I do, really. :)Meleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848998866008289402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-89095808914112607162011-03-25T13:29:41.046-04:002011-03-25T13:29:41.046-04:00There's something wonderful about flowers, pet...There's something wonderful about flowers, petals...Kaleidoscope Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09626214724432479333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-62798184280927977222011-03-25T12:31:09.456-04:002011-03-25T12:31:09.456-04:00Do not ever doubt your talent with words, this is ...Do not ever doubt your talent with words, this is simply beautiful <3Ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11877573276097160343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-76703249057119157052011-03-25T08:21:53.806-04:002011-03-25T08:21:53.806-04:00I love this. I have felt this feeling many times a...I love this. I have felt this feeling many times and it hurts<br />so much.<br />I hope that this decision brings lightness to you.<br />xxxEverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00921598912873448075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-68477209974723433552011-03-25T08:13:55.030-04:002011-03-25T08:13:55.030-04:00What a brilliant poem! The image of the petals wo...What a brilliant poem! The image of the petals works really well here, how you've shown different aspects of them to relate to your feelings. You make sadness so tenderly beautiful & elegant. I do hope that you are feeling better.nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13025913472730278205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-4186763557443712152011-03-25T06:57:21.764-04:002011-03-25T06:57:21.764-04:00my dear friend Melee, (well, is it okay to conside...my dear friend Melee, (well, is it okay to consider you my friend? in my part... :)) this poem is one of my favorite post of yours... but heartbreaking still. i hope you're okay... <br /><br />..and i've been thinking about the blogger break you told me in your comment. *sigh* :) <br /><br />..i'll check out your formspring! i always wanted to make one too, but i'm too lazy, i guess :) (maybe next time)<br /><br />loves!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-75792541359369727282011-03-25T01:07:32.911-04:002011-03-25T01:07:32.911-04:00You're right, Blogger is awfully addictive :)
...You're right, Blogger is awfully addictive :)<br /><br />I hope that you're doing okay, <br />I tend to write when I'm sad too, or thoughtful it seems haha :)<br /><br />This is a beautiful poem, I can almost imagine the petals swishing around in my head, like white fish splashing around in a fishbowl. <br /><br />:)P.s. I am Me.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00894306731762203151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6644718415179858689.post-57769542131805342112011-03-25T00:42:14.290-04:002011-03-25T00:42:14.290-04:00Oh how I can relate to this tonight (without elabo...Oh how I can relate to this tonight (without elaboration and with certain persons cloaked in the anonymity of the Internet.)<br /><br />That's a beautiful poem, Melee. I loved it a lot and what you said spoke my feelings. The past few weeks have been very happy ones, except for a few very sad things which come to mind after I turn out the light and sometimes surprise me during the day as well. But the weeks have been happy nonetheless.<br /><br />Thank you and goodnight---!<br />EverlyEverly Pleasanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852907174929173979noreply@blogger.com